Black Poetry : Act Intended

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Apr 3, 2007.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Act Intended

    My rhme glory is like a divine story they’re passed down
    From father to son and they’ll bother a ton or mass of clowns
    Look I fry chicken and try tricking KFC with this dynamite
    Taste marinated in the right paste my cook pots are aligned tight
    Look when my facts come cats act dumb like flunkies in school
    Junkies rule they shoot up, polute and corrupt their veins like fools
    Rhyme in a relaxed manner get taxed for my bandana can’t holler and jive
    Over a dollar five on the road to fame and code is framed on my wall alive
    And in color, jerk crap and convert it to rap it hurt to slap the taste
    Out of mouths while onroute down south like Ludachris what a waste
    Get ready and hype while my lamp emit a steady light this girl name
    Betty right kissing in the room listening to a tune her sex world my aim
    Hurl this dame on the bed and said “boo you gonna give me some?
    I live on the run ducking thugs now F-UCKING in love with you honey bun
    Screw this gang bang clout me and you need to hang out no doubt have fun
    Kissing and reminiscing while you twisting them brown round hips”
    “OK RHYME your love raps carry weight but let me get you very straight
    Never have sex on the first date that’s the worse fate I may flirt and fake
    but I stay alert when I shake booty boys try make a cutie give them cake
    you wanna make a dent in my panties and get some of my mint candies”
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now rhymebad u cutting up here .....
     
  3. Ikoro

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    sssss----

    Hot. A bit over the top perhaps, but the artistic creativity is mos def appreciated.

    Still feeling it, RB.

    Keep that pen bleeding.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    I'm a soldier plastering brains by overmastering lame tasks be in combat with my stats face battle fatigue as I saddle intrigue and danger as a stranger approaches he holds a knife look bold with strife had to duck his stroke ***** wanna cut my throat, but I hope to escape he has a sleazy walk no easy talk he performed a squeezy stalk not a thrill to see but why he wanna kill me
     
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    Smoothe.

    You are adept in the art rhyming, Brother. I am glad to see it.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    you get the new poet award from me sound like maddrapper another poet that used to be on here will have to colab with you one day

    9/10
    uno
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props on this one for real yall
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo bad

    this flow is sic

    um i lost you on the last line
     
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