Black Poetry : Act four, before the note was simple....

watzinaname

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Before the simple note was written,
Let's rewind to act four,
It appears our damsel was quite smitten,
ill prepared for what was in store.
The setting is a bedroom,
candle wax smelled of lavender,
the bubbly, no longer, uncorked.
It seemed as though a scavenger
rummaged through the lingerie drawer.
Pictures of a happy couple, scattered,
A champagne flute shattered,
glass intermingled
with that of the full length mirror.
A jagged blade,
used in vein, used in terror,
on top a sheet made
unexpectedly crimson.
There is no rhyme or reason,
that his note would say no more
than I still love you,
but not like before.
 

AfroBoricuaRoni

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this is sooooooo tight

this piece was so tight man. it allowed be to paint a mental reflection with vivid details. nice job.


Roni
 

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