Quiet Poetry Lounge : Act 13

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jul 6, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was not meant to be
    this...........................way
    LOVE
    did peek around the corner
    it did whisper in my ear
    it did place your name on my
    mind.....
    time......and time....and time
    again.........I chased you/your
    vision around the clock 25 hours
    a day......I went to sleep dreaming
    of the pursuit....the pursuit...of
    happiness....you....us.....we
    together........................4
    ever..........There was no
    intention for the pain to break the dam
    for tears to be shed for YOU
    to disdain me emancipate me from your
    spirit....Pain was not in the plan
    ...but it wrote itself on the script
    of our lives and played itself out
    on the stage we call we....and I
    the main character...acting....out
    of character....and leaving you
    on the stage to close the show
    to adlib where my mind was/is
    what my lines could've been.....
    ....and the curtain drops
    ......ending the show after Act 13
    ****...

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Well .... .... .... .... .... .... ****~!!

    "10".
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERB

    MAN U OFF THE HOOK AND FLOWIN AT TOP SPEED
    IT WAS'NT MENT TO BE DES WAY .................LOVE
    IS A MUTHA!!:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :cool:
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    blak

    please don't make a So'ja cry man

    feeling the love or loss of love
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    Your work demands attention dog... excellent scribe!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *sigh*

    this is so real

    i can feel it...

    -7 :spinstar:
     
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    VERB

    Makes me wonder why we are so foolish

    when it comes to LOVE.

    We got: don't want it: we lose it: and wish we had it back:

    It a viscious cylce that I would LOVE to break.

    I am feelin this peice: make me wish for an ACT 14: reprise
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've been touched

    thank you for sharing:rolleyes:
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLaKnEsS....


    some tymes....

    it happens so suddenly that we
    don't have a chance to breathe...
    & for this reason we handle things
    bad-ly or in a way we wish we
    could change... but unfortunately...
    with love there is no guarantee.

    i can dig this peace. :)

    OneLuv.
    Queen Ga~
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much LOVE

    peace
    blak
    verb