Black Poetry : Acknowledge my existence

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  1. geegee

    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You can't say that I can only be seen when unexpected blessings come.
    ......You see, I am more than that.......
    You can't say that I don't know how it feels to hurt.
    ......Oh, I had my share of pain.........
    Pain that I had no choice to go through.
    .......Pain I took just for you.........
    You can't say that I am never on time.
    .......I am NOT even one-second less than perfect.
    .................I am what I am................
    You can't say that I don't hear the sounds of your tears.
    Or even the taste of your fears.
    ........I am your comforter............

    Only if you acknowledge me, I will show you LIFE.
    .........LIFE, LIFE, LIFE, LIFE, LIFE, LIFE........


    Only if you acknowledge me you WILL NOT say
    ..............I DON'T EXIST!.................​
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep pledge, I felt it and understand it's worth. Welcome aboard.
     
  3. geegee

    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you...
     
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    :wb: Poet...


    Yes this is about Dear mighty LOrd...


    thanks ..

    yes manny times i try to stand up for him...
    try to holy his name when they put him down....


    I have a life here outside destee,s place...here in holland people often look weird when you talk about god and and the mighty one....
    Holland has his good sides to..

    In the states people to recodnise at least his excistance i only sumthimes have the feeling that they fear him less than they should and i,m not talkingabout the average the people just people but.....
    the people who (think they) hold the power there....

    so i,m often expressing here in holland about his excistance.. :eek:








    I loved this piece Poet....

    we are looking out to hear from you more:love:






    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many things in life happen through prayer, and when they do, at times I just say to myself, gee, that was so simple, why make it so hard? Such truth in this, and I thank you for putting it into words.
     
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    You there... yes, GeeGee, you are right on time.
     
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    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i thank you all...i read this poem every day and it brings so much light into my life...thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was a confess of perfection gee gee
    your on point and correct tyte flow felt all of it
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep enjoyed this flow
     
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are so brilliant
     
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