Black Poetry : access denied

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticwordstris, May 8, 2003.

  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Access denied,
    My father says he doesn't approve
    I wish he could put hiself in my shoes.
    Does he even know what its like to be forced from the one you love,
    Whats meant to be will be says the man above.

    Access denied,
    i couldn't be with him even if i tried,
    he questions me why, and all i can do is cry.
    my father said he doesn't approve,
    maybe i should run away, we can be like bonnie and clyde
    that seems like a good move.

    Access denied,
    i couldn't be with him if i cried my eyes dry.
    i sit in my room wondering if it ever will be,
    i try to explain that he the one that keeps me happy.
    nobody knows how strong our love is,
    why can't my dad just mind his own business.

    ACCESS DENIED
    my father says he doesn't approve,
    i wish he could put hiself in my shoes!!!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ACCESS DENIED,
    Because it's fly ~
    Don't ever deny,
    These roaming eyes... Great Work!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved this flow great work of da pen
     
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    you are your fathers child. he loves you too no dout. i'm sorry that your father does'nt approve
    i wish you could put yourself in his shoes. tyte scribe. loved it
     
  5. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo this poem is about my father and how he doesn't want me to be with a certain person because of his reputation on my block he's considered a bad boy but he's really not like that.

    anyways i'm glad to know you like my poem thanx peoples
     
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