Black Poetry : Acceptance

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you accept me
    No matter
    My past
    And see my potential?
    You see I realize and accept
    My faults
    But I also know that they have strengthened me
    To become the one that you need me to be
    Reaching down in the depths of my soul
    I have found myself
    And in finding myself
    I have found us
    And in finding us
    I have found my purpose
    And that is to please you
    I haven’t been all that I could have been
    Yet
    If you hang in with me
    I can become that and more
    For in this brief amount of time
    I have reflected and grown
    And become more than what I was
    More than a man
    More than a lover
    I have become complete
    And
    In becoming complete
    I have become
    The only man you will ever need!
     
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    This is so compelling. Yours is a bold statement that she should take to heart.
     
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    I am one saved to serve
    Your every need
    Your every desire
    feeding your heart mind and soul
    Beholding your being
    The very core of it all.....
    You
    Sitting yet high up in your tower
    Yet I see waiting for me
    Is the champagne still on ice
    The rug yet cover the floor
    Where we once........
    oh right sure
    secrets shhhhh!!!
    im waiting
    At your beck and call
    Im here
    to please
    To ease
    To say.......
    Im back
     
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    1poet..thanks for the read...
     
  5. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1svd2srv...u trying to get something started?
     
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    Did she? Your invite was very seductive.
     
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    :) Simply beautiful!!!
     
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    butterfly#1 going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Isn't it tho' !
     
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