Black Poetry : Acceptance

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Leaky103, Jan 20, 2004.

  1. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When others deserted, you remained.
    When others persecuted, you respected.
    When others doubted, you encouraged.
    When others took their love away, you gave yours infinite.
    When others laughed, you offered a smile.
    So, when I say I love you, please do as you always have --
    accept me with my imperfections
    and know that my heart is always pure.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis here speaks out and i really love it too
    coz it remind me of self
    tyte scribe poet
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I felt your heart here, you laid it straight to the point.
     
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    i agree with rich and watz very heart felt, enjoyed it.
     
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