Black Poetry : Abstract

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mikha'el, Dec 5, 2010.

  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lose comprehension of our intellect synthetic fabriaction

    Of the genetics of this generation

    Only truth is that spoken in revelations

    Of an end that thou would truthfully commend as freedom an emancipation

    But freedom was honestly never free

    For we died for what our blind eyes & minds failed to see

    Young girls living loosely while the men pass quickly

    In & out no whereabouts encased in their lives no means to shout

    So truthfully this what our culture speaks of being where they wanna be

    Assmilated in prostituted satanism leaving no whereabouts

    Adults today are mere equals though there assumed to be sages to kids

    But none of honestly speak on what truth is

    For truth lies to itself in a world where knowledge has ever more become subjective

    And you got false prophets speaking on electives

    Blame culture for the demise for its faker than the lives and faces

    Of the people who've made it

    A shame on them too for their gifted with voice & lives & never do ****

    But as i speak i must digress some & console the critic in me

    For we are imperfect perfection a utopia is something we'll never be

    But no empathy is given collectively for as a whole we are gifted

    But claim not we rot in contentment why do such when death is imminent

    Intimate is our lust but is love of such a gift is heard of

    Crazy insane where they do that at

    Such ideas are about as abstract as this poem you have read

    All has been said I just hope it didn't preceed ya head
     
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    This was fire .........
    inside my head ya words not dead
    heard and respond til da day dawn
    we have to learn in reality
    this not some old fomality
    keep talking i'm listening...............
     
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