Black Poetry : ~~*ABSTRACT*~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There was an abstract feeling to all of
    this.
    Something dipped in liquid surrealism.
    I needed or rather I searched for a
    trueness and a realness that just wasn't to
    be found.
    No peace for the righteous?
    And the wicked has sound minds?

    I strived to stay on the track and not slip
    into an obscurity of deep, dark and unfeeling reasons.
    Somebody cradle my head in a warm embrace.
    Someone whisper sweet peace in my ears and
    steal all of my insecurities.
    Someone fortify me with the strength and courage to
    love me for me.

    Someone breath love into my weary soul.
    Like a sculpter kneading tired clay,
    determined to create and bring forth.
    I search and I gaze.
    I'm plowing the fields of my mindscape on a search to
    find a realness, a love, some emotion to embody this
    tired body.
    I'm on a search to find a pure affection and reflection of
    love reflected in the eye-gates of another worthy to
    have my love-gift ejected.

    I'm in a frenzy to find this abstractness that
    so many search for.
    I'm on a search to discover a realness
    that holds my destiny and fate in purity and
    something fresh...somethng new.
    I'm apart of this liquid surrealism and I gladly
    hang-glide in this sky of vast, tranquil, blue
    beauty that nourishes a sea of love for my
    dry soul-scape.

    Copyright 2004
    ~PropheticNsyght
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...you have an uncanny ability to create some of the most
    powerful stanzas...

    I hope the rains of the abstract come soon and pour out
    over your dry soul-scape until it overflows

    Great Read Poet!
    Feeling this...
     
  3. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whats good ma,

    Baby you are truly a blessing to me. I thank you for your ability to make me feel like i'm the only one! I was a little down, but thank you for resurrecting my joy.
    Peace and Soul
     
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    this was so awesome and deeply felt scribing here
    like butter smooth
     
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    Wanting to be pulled out of the daze, and snapped into something real and fresh. Life can bring us down sometimes, I hope you are feeling more like your true self now. You always bring such an earthiness to your writing. Flow on poet.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you ma. Your words mean so so so much to me. I appreciate.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Babyboi thank you deeply and from the bottom of my heart!