Black Poetry : ABSRACT FLOW

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sheikdadon, Aug 8, 2006.

  1. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SITTIN ALONE IN DA RAIN
    LETTIN DA RAIN ALLEVIATE DA PAIN
    **** COUNSELING N MEDS
    @ TIMES DA RAPES MAKE ME WISH I WAS DEAD
    WHEN ITS ALL SAID N DONE IM **** OUTTA LUCK
    ABOUT ME PEOPLE REALLY DONT GIVE A ****
    DEALING WITH ALL DIS PENT UP ANGER & RAGE
    YOU CAN SEE MY VIEWS PAGE AFTER PAGE
    SMOKING GREEN LIKE, BUT IT AINT QUITE SAGE
    CUZ LIFE ALONE IS THE OPPOSITE OF TRANQUILITY & BLISS
    IM DA WALKING PROOF OF THIS
    FLOWING AGGRESSSION & PAIN WONDERING WHENVER WILL IT STOP
    CANT SLEEP WITHOUT HANDGUNS W/DOUBLE DIGIT SHOTS
    DRINKING TO EXPLETE MEMORIES PAINFUL BLOCKS
    LOOKIN 4 DA SUN BUT ALL I SEE IS RAIN
    IM TRYNA COME TO TERMS WITH ALL DA ILLS ON MY BRAIN
    HOW COULD ONE FORCEFULLY TAKE WHATS NOT GIVEN
    THEN GET A LENIENT SENTENCE CUZ HE HAD CHILDREN
    SOME **** I JUST DONT GET I PROUDLY SERVE MY COUNTRY
    N FOR WHAT LIKE NAS SAID MY COUNTRY ****TED ON ME
    IF THEY DONT LIKE IT THEY CAN JUST GET RID OF ME
    BUT AS A STRONG BLACK WOMAN IM COMPELLED TO SPEAK MY PEACE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another tyte scribe poeticly
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected], I feel the pain and anger and frustration of the piece because i too have been there at one point in my life be strong and love yourself.
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As a strong black woman I'm compelled to speak my piece
    Amazed at your flow on this tyte anger and rage release
    I have walked more than a mile in those same shoes
    But a victim is a label that I definitely refuse to chose

    So let it out and then keep on trucking. :argue:
     
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