Black Poetry : Absolutely

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Shango, Jun 5, 2003.

  1. Shango

    Shango Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That sublime light
    shining brightly
    from deep within u
    is evidence
    that u are truly blessed,
    and absolutely beautiful,
    Please believe it.
    When I look at u
    I see heaven in ur eyes
    ordained with such bliss
    anointed with grace
    that can be compared
    to a baby girl's kiss.
    Like Jamaica's golden sand,
    and Congo's diamond filled brooks
    ur beauty has capivated me
    with ur natural nubian looks,
    in ur midst
    I am warmed by ur spirit
    more than the afternoon sun,
    and touched by the melodic harmony
    that flows from ur tongue.
    Indeed,
    u are absolutely
    the most beauteous thing
    to me and the loveliest thing
    the heavens have allowed me to see.
    When I see u
    I see the coming of spring,
    the blooming of the flowers,
    and the songs that the robins sing,
    the honeysuckle's sweet scent
    and the aroma of the red cedar tree
    makes me very content
    to say that God made u beautiful
    absolutely.


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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome shango welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of bond
    welcome wit dis gentle flow
    welcome wit the love u know
    the beauty of compassion u scribe
    as i welcome u inside .........very nice piece
    keep flowin as i giveth love for love to be gave !

    from above in flyte
    $R
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you really see me hidden behind grandma's tree
    or are you just imagining what it would be?

    Just a thought~

    WELCOME
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely...smooth.
     
  5. PurpleMoons

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    Welcome Shango! I enjoyed this piece! Absolutely beautiful!
     
  6. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte piece fa sho... i like the way you flow... :)

    peace
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribe...
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte, i like, i really like. u make me feel like ur talking to me lol.
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent poetry, Poet!
    Peace to ya!
     
  10. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shango, that was beautiful :)
     
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