Black Poetry : Absent Lover

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Feb 22, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't offer
    what she
    don't have

    Finding flaws
    in every
    connection...

    Stranger calling
    another someone
    at random

    I'm glad I'm not
    her...

    ... continuously
    wrong

    She curses like
    commissions on
    sales she'll
    never make

    as unforseen
    brothas in her
    life elude her

    Absent Lover

    Searching for
    dreams
    misplaced
    way back

    -- like words
    in the silence
    of good-bye




    (c) 2002 FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2.


    nah... why you tryin' ta start sumthin' early this heah
    mornin'??!! :D i'm lovin' the flow of this sistah dear!

    the enitire piece is calming in its truthfulness!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2...

    You're always "present" with ya timely conscious flowz!!!

    Love it!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  4. Danilyn

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    U've done it once again....

    keep puttin it down sis! Lovin your peaceful flows...
     
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    Sista that is Smooooth..... Lovin it
    Scribe on baby, scribe on....

    MrMichael
     
  6. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The insight on this piece is worth the meditation it beacons.

    Thanks for sharing it with us.
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To my family-n-scribe

    I thank you all for your words! They are much appreciated!!

    N2 :)
     
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