Black Poetry : ABOUT YOUR LOVE(i wonder)

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wonder
    when i'm absent in body
    am i present in your mind
    do you reach for the divinity
    of my being
    that lingers as
    intangible ESSENCE
    and return empty handed
    while inevitable night evades
    and the sandman creeps
    managing to remain ever so elusive

    i wonder
    if my LOVE
    LOYAL
    .....LASTING
    ............LONGING
    and
    COMPLETE
    overwhelms your spaces
    causing sensory overload
    and places stress on
    your slower yet natural
    progression towards
    EXCLUSIVITY
    and your ideal of the
    AFOREMENTIONED

    i wonder
    who else partakes in
    your passionate gazes
    ultra-intensified stares
    and sweet chocolate EXSTASE
    that melts all over my physical
    as we rhymically rose the mercury
    resulting in a tasty combination
    of LUST
    .......L:heart: VE
    and
    ..........LIFE

    i wonder
    how many cubic feet
    i occupy in your heart
    or am i forbidden and
    kept only in the simplicity
    of thought
    as you restrict access on
    RAW emotional territory
    but adivise me not to
    do the same
    and demolish my protective barrier

    i wonder
    if time truly tells
    and when it does
    is it highly informative or confrontational
    clairvoyant or prophetic
    my underlying belief is
    that is whispers in the air
    what is already known
    second hand from the SOUL...

    but i still can't help but wonder!
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SAY

    THAT, POET!!!

    I thoroughly lost my mind in the fierce rush of this flow! Appreciating the way you articulate ~ and that's first hand from the heart!

    a
     
  3. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    first hand from the heart
    still
    caresses the being
    that soulfully
    releases
    then recaptures
    what is forsaken
    spiritually
    and consoles
    my SOUL!

    back at cha ALYCE...LOVE&RESPECT

    DP2G
     
  4. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I second this

    emotion, Dyme!!!! This rolls so smoove! Like Butta Bro!


    mojo
     
  5. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH NO...

    it's MOJO...:) (sorry really wanted to say that)
    sounded like a good beginning to a rhyme...but anyways...

    smoove is the best way
    to incorporate emotion
    into the mix
    that will bake at 375 degrees
    resulting in
    poetic pastry...

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa ~

    Po -- Et !!

    This is a Love-ly piece ~ my heart read this three times
    faster than my mind -- :lol:

    Thanx for sharing the SoulurN2 with the family DP2G ~

    I definitely enjoyed reading this!


    One :heart:
     
  7. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TWO TUMBS UP

    OFF THA HEEZY

    TRULY FEELIN THIS PEICE

    HAD'TA READ IT 3 TIMES.....AND ONCE MORE

    Beautiful words scribbed in the ryme passage of art!
    who holds tha key to your heart?

    They should be so lucky.........................
     
  8. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!!!!! Lovin this ta death!!!

    Go ahead and wonder, im sure after reading this she wont mind....

    8th!
     
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    mhmm...
    when u luuv passionately
    eyes closed arms open
    & u take a minute to look
    at your love you wonder
    we don't he/she do like i do?
    luuved this.
    thank you.
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  10. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2URSOUL~ lately love has kept me inspired...:heart:

    MoEFFECTIVE~...i'm in love with everyone and everything...from trees, winds gentle breeze, to my bestest of friends...so in response to your query...life holds the key...

    8th wonder~ she bettah not mind...LOL!

    WILDFLOWER~ see you knew exactly what i meant...we're both lovers of LOVE :)

    *thanks for the read e'rebody...I love y'all too*

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
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