Black Poetry : ABOUT TWO SO CLOSE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da candles flickering softly
    down by the fire place
    secrets shared inside sweet grace

    Their eyez sparkle in each other sight
    there is magic in da air, on such enchanted night
    beyond da heart who carry da soul
    they found something deep da spirit now hold

    Quietly they speak in whispers
    even though they are all alone
    words spoken endearing yet felt so strong
    with a sweet melodic tone

    He gives her a single red rose from his heart
    and pledge his devotion in cheers of a new start
    She gives him her key and mirror his emotions
    he kiss da billows of her back thighs
    in warmth yet she felt surprise

    He take her hand in his
    her radiant glow of essence drift in
    he place'd a soft blue velvet box inside her palm
    she struggle deeply to remain calm

    She open da box slowly
    as he caresses her cheek
    a brilliant rare jewel dat her heart seek
    sippin on some table wine then he begin to speak

    We are one mindful thought inside two souls
    you are life and me just in ya mold
    for i am da air da windz upon ya face
    here we are dear in this secret place

    They was close ....Afar yet close.....close
    he knew he was truely bless
    she was in comfort from da sweet caress
    they was friends & lovers
    LOVERS & FRIENDS


    :kiss2::kiss1::toasts::love:
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I drink in the beauty of such a romantic piece...

    many lines caught my attention...

    bathing in the bubbles of your compassionate soul...

    one's breath is like a misty haze, taken away.


    so delightfully enchanting
     
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    your words rumbles deep within me
    i just swoon in it all Thank you so much for the light i can see clear now
    and hope i can restore .......see when two so close it's as dearing as lovin
    when lovin you are as close as ever ......friends & lovers / Lovers & friends
    is enchanting ......Peace sweetie pie most humble
     
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    mizjoice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad that you didn't give up......
    sounds like all is as it should be.....
    very romantic piece.
     
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    Friend & Lover

    if you can get that boieeee

    it's proper

    you brought the essence again man you've been on fire
    i don't see you burning out anytime soon
     
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    Mzjoice.......i wish it was but i'll take what is given Thankz dear.

    yeah if you can get both is would be a bow wow fo real , but i'll take
    what is offered me.....Thankz bruh ! so'ja
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Friends and lovers...

    A beautiful notion! I enjoyed the read Sir. Richness!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Thank u so dearly sistah coco
     
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