Black Poetry : About She

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  1. coey30

    coey30 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My phone keeps ringing asking who is she
    Asking what about me
    Asking why can't I see
    Asking how can this be
    Really?
    Seriously?
    Let me to explain this verbally
    So it is understood clearly
    We speak sometimes occasionally
    Sharing each others biography
    Trying to see if there is a possibility
    In there was common ground between you and me
    Maybe I'm moved to slowly
    Maybe I moved to cautiously
    But I got kids so I move carefully
    I mean I have to act responsibly
    See I don't do daily, I only do yearly
    And in our convo is when it came to me
    That I could not be the he you needed me to be
    So I backed up so you could be free
    Now About she
    Have you ever meet someone and knew instantly
    I knew she was the real deal and not a wannabe
    I know it sounds like insanity
    But it's been three days and she's on my mind constantly
    See I love deep and hard, I inherited it honestly
    We share the same philosophy
    Some look for quantity but I want quality
    She's easy to talk to, not like geometry
    She domestic, not foreign policy
    She got my attention and peeked my curiosity
    I heard someone say she's a true anomaly
    For her I'd convert to Scientology
    She gives of herself with true generosity
    I follow my heart and not astronomy
    My heart is pounding with fierce ferocity
    So I prayed about it and I pray constantly
    With consistency
    And I came to me like prophecy
    What I am witnessing is no dime store novelty
    She has me trying to find better ways to say mentally
    How she won me over and abundantly
    Someone who was made just for me
    Finally...
    What I must do leaves a bad taste in my mouth like broccoli
    Some may say it an hypocrisy
    I did not choose you consequently
    For that I extend my sincerest apology
    I'm out!!!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the older we get, when we meet SPECIAL, we just know.
     
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    Sometimes it is what it is and you just know. Love the read thank you for sharing
     
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    coey30
    I Enjoyed your flow

    The whole poem is so on point in so many ways
    My favorite parts because she is different unlike anyone I have ever known