Quiet Poetry Lounge : ABOUT LIFE FOR REAL

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Apr 28, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ABOUT LIFE FOR REAL

    My behavior is major with flavor that blends with a dish of food
    And will twist attitudes like hot sauce yall read this don’t elude
    Apply rhymes and try to design new lyrics with the true spirits
    Of grammar, offer a softer approach like a coach try steer it
    In an athletic direction energetic aggression is needed already
    Stampeded microphones, charged with crime can’t dodge the time
    The judge and jury will throw sludge and fury then lock you
    Up the block is corrupt with drugs no love for a thug it shocks a few
    To be in the pen make use of my cell if I break loose be well educated
    Wearing bling is satisfaction because it bring the action that has devastasted
    Girls, go to barbers get my perm shaved then learn a trade become a involved
    Winner true while doing a job interview at Burger King it open the doorknob
    For opportunity in a hot community trash attitude for fast food many
    Calories of fat now have salaries with stats body too heavy to move plenty
    Times lay home and stay alone trying to lose weight no cure for this any-
    Body can fall in this category it’s a tall brisk story, life is a terrific circus
    With no specific purpose, knows the fury of clothes and jewelry it perks lust
    Plot renown as I jot down long notes that become strong quotes fighting
    The habit of using writing tablets like politicans your votes are exciting
    Me for real,
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    okay... so i like this one..

    one's purpose is their own to define...

    when u let society and others' define ur purpose.. it is indeed easy to get caught up...

    and so u know.... i love thugs.... thug angels!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If those who are so quick to label had an inkling of what lurks inside, they'd be astounded. Tight write.
     
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    GeorgeM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was bouncing my head to this tight write while enjoying the story you were telling....that was life for real my friend....excellent write....thanks for sharing



    poetic respect




    peace and blessings
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u rip this apart here and told the story
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all right thanks for the props on this one for real yall
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You Go!
    You make it spark up in here!
    Realness witht the Real voice of Real, Being so real you bring yourself Past reality.
    I aint mad...Ya make mw wanna Rhyme a lil something Myself!
    Flow on!!!
     
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