Quiet Poetry Lounge : About dis woman .....wild n' out

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Darken lovely sweet n' kind
    soft beauty caressin my mind
    lace'd in cares touching tyme
    this woman surely shine

    Her lips of golden kiss
    and eyes of yes sensual bliss
    making da heart skip and miss
    for her wicked charm is swiss

    She brings a future bright
    singing da song of love's delight
    body arch ummm so right
    wrap up feverishly tight

    If she only knew my heart
    and the love dat sit at large
    to have and hold at night
    to make her my forever fight

    There something about this woman
    dat stand so tall something so raw
    how she speak and smile in my eye
    da heat of her romantic fragrance
    lingers behind lone to make her mines

    Xtremely, something about this woman
    dat holds my thoughts still thinking of
    her set off passionate chillz
    if only she knew me and what i feel
    to make us a we a love so real

    maybe i'll keep da fantasy real
    and my dream forever deeply seal
    and what i feel traped like an bill
    maybe i'll just let go and move on
    but something about this woman

    wait !
    stop !

    Awaken to realistic of tyme
    she will never be mines
    only in my sleepless slumber
    and da fantasies of my thunder
    crossed inside da maze of wish
    she will never be my main dish
    nor will i feel da golden kiss
    forth i'll drop this crazy bliss
    and stop all of this .

    wild n' out
    :qqb008:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, sounds like a wonderful, passion filled fantasy. Only one way to make the fantasy real, and that is to touch it. Can the reality of it possibly be better than the fantasy? Whew, what if... Nice drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes and just maybe it can be a reality...... whewwww what i would do !
     
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