Black Poetry : ABORTION

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulosophy, Jun 29, 2008.

  1. soulosophy

    soulosophy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your narrative, held me from beginning to end. Once pregnant, no decision is easy, every decision has it's lasting effects. Potent read.
     
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    soulosophy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you and Bless U sis Watz...truly appreciated! It was real hard for me to write this piece, but it was something that I needed to express. I've seen young girls throw away their babies after birth. I've seen a young baby in a dustbin downstairs where I live. I've seen so many parents disown their daughters for being pregnant so young as if it they have committed some major crime. As you say sis, "no decision is ever easy" and personally for me I wonder whether one can truly learn to forgive oneself and heal.

    Peace, love, light...
    1UL
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    Unblieveable write. it was honest and captivating and so important for you to put out there. so many young girls have been through this and have felt the same way you feel. its nice to know your not alone. i liked the spin in the end about how the boy would still choose her for his mother. i like the forgiveness and i think that it is important to remember that if God can forgive you your sins then who are you not to do the same. congrats from beginning to end it was AMAZING. Brianna
     
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    Thank you Sis Brianna for your kind and encouraging words. May your Light remain illumined.

    Peace & Blessings
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    oh my my this had my head deeper then u know i love to see a spin of this
    in depth more more more poetess please !!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    a story

    told over and over again

    support from family and friends is great

    but support from the greater society

    would do wonders in my opinion

    great piece here sista soul

    great read

    heartfelt
     
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