Quiet Poetry Lounge : Abortion [inside]

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  1. Absolut

    Absolut Active Member MEMBER

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    Abortion [inside]
    by Absolut

    She rushed in Death by the touch of him
    Again & again...
    Tearing in the wind of sin til her soul turned cold in the lust of them just alone
    She became...too
    numb to this pain shown some
    In the dumb of shame she told none
    From the cries broken in so young
    These lies unspoken became ~1~
    Die.
    Seen in her mind, as he was EYE
    For the lack of trust in kind she cut her own sun
    Why?
    Was she tracing these lines of tears
    Hoping pages of blood would just flood from these years and I
    crying from a time of hear felt
    Her image as dreams so appear each
    in the wind of fear
    Moment
    twisted....
    til breathes of mine 'ceased and I became "De' " inside she became me...as
    "Souls of past in the reflection of leaves"
    she could see...us
    Dancing in the fall from trees mentally
    Pieces of her broken family I was, never to be. Only so a-part
    We shared the Death of one heart slowly...
    Together.


    Feel me..


    Yup 100proof...is back for everyone this round's on me...it's good to be back but tell me the truth...

    Do ya miss me..lol
    If ya do then show some love
    [email protected] boy
    ~1 I'm out.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely pose'd tyte write indeed one love given .
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write
    enjoyed the read
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet...your gift is evident
    the skill has obviously been honed...
    with the most precise instruments
    this piece shined through like
    a diamond through carbon...

    I'm Awestruck...and needing more
    ...so I give you this

    ~~~~Encore~~~~~
    Sage
     
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