Black Poetry : Abide the Darkness

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  1. Angela22

    Angela22 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am in love with the dark and the shadows outside

    In love with the cover and mystery it provides

    The ominous, numinous intent that it hides

    The way that it separates and how it divides

    I love how it captures the entire night sky

    And all that swim, and walk, and fly

    No way to escape it, no matter who tries

    The Great and the Weak, the Truth and the Lie

    Of men, it does not regard their pride

    Of women, it will not regard as brides

    It's all, alone, and everything inside

    It's no one's company...

    Save for those who abide
     
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  2. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice one right here doe like the flow of this
     
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  3. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Really nice piece...I like the tone , the darkness that doesn't discriminate.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    youre definitely becoming a favorite poet :) props to this piece/peace
     
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  5. Angela22

    Angela22 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Haha. Much love to ya.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your lines are like enticing morsels to know what lies in between each line...beyond poetry. Very nice piece!

    I enjoyed the read!
    Coco
     
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    Cool poetry...
     
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