Black Poetry : Abaddon**

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Abaddon**


    The Bells sound!

    Is it time already?

    Ears hear chiming in three’s;
    absence of hope; not even a breeze.

    I walk down the long
    S
    ...T
    .....A
    ........I
    ..........R
    ............C
    ...............A
    ..................S
    .....................E.
    No peace. No thoughts, just pure unease.

    Flames and
    the smell of Brimstone
    float on the air for a minute.
    Face to face with beautiful Elysian fields. Sparkling waterfalls, sunny skies and
    Streets of crystal.
    Beautiful women and Handsome Men.

    Ain’t this some Motha…SHUT MY MOUTH!!!!

    He greets me with a kiss and hug.
    Says his name is Lucifer and he’s here to be my friend and later my judge.
    The meaning of that last comment escapes me for a moment.

    Enjoying the sights. The breeze and all the lights.
    Beauty and Eternity; a seemingly exciting combination.
    Revelry, Gaiety and Smiles that melt ice.

    “Having a good time?” seductively he asks. My body, quickly aroused.
    Dang! Not by a man, huhhnnn?
    “Man, I’m good.” I say, returning smile for smile.
    He smiles and
    now the shock of my life!
    In my ears
    ring the sound of mocking laughter and explosions.

    Light diminished and darkness reins.
    The river turns to lifeless souls in a hell-fire vein.

    Illusion and Hologram.
    Lucifer at my elbow,
    ****! Dude is hideously ugly! The epitome of Evil.
    I need to scream, but nothing comes.

    He looks at me smugly.
    The entire world around becomes desolate and barren.
    Pools of fire and lakes of flame.
    No sound of birds, happiness or a breeze.
    Just the sounds of evil and blood curdling screams.

    Eyes full of terror,
    a mind that can’t comprehend.
    He glances at me knowingly and smirks just
    as I’m seized and dragged along.

    “You thought it was Heaven, but welcome to Abaddon**!”

    **HELL

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    "Poeta Nascitur, Non Fit"
    "Poets are born, not made"
    ~PropheticNsyght
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwww!!!!!
    i don't wanna go here no way !
    tyte drop felt ya flowing
     
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    ya pen hot!!!!
    tight drop
     
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    Mannnnn..........you is most definitely on fire son...a real hot flow indeed!
     
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    They do say that road is paved with good intentions....This is visually horrifying...Definitely a wrong turn to take. Keep those vivid images coming.
     
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    whoa!!

    See This is why you are one of my favorites up in here ya style is off the chain! Madddddddd props up in here poet!
    SMH
    Ya got it working poet and ya pen is smoking hot!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you rich! I apreciate the love like no other!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ma your love is well received. Thank you so so so much! God bless you beautiful.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL I'm glad you feel me Greggy. 'preciate the love pa.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm real glad your feeling me ma. You're absolutely right!!!