Black Poetry : A YUNG HURT LONELY SOUL

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  1. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOULD SOMEBODY HELP ME PLEASE!!!
    MY HEART IS FILLED WIT A FOUL DISEASE
    IT SEEMS GOOD BUT DA SYMPTOMS R FOUL
    ITS COLD N HOLLOWED ADMITTANCE ISNT ALLOWED
    TODAY MY SOUL CRIED TILL MY BODY GOT SICK
    LONELY AS HELL AND MY MIND CONSTANTLY DRIFTS
    IVE BEEN DISASSOCIATED WITH DA WORLD FA YEARS
    LAWD HERE I AM IN SUBMISSION SHOWIN PAIN N FEAR
    WHAT DID I DO TO MAKE U LEAVE N STAY AWAY
    U LET MY UNCLE GET ME BUT EVEN SO I PRAYED
    EVEN AS AN ADULT I WALK ROUND HURT N ENRAGED
    STEPPOPS AINT LIKE ME HE BEAT ME OUTTA MY MIND
    GOT HIT WEN BOYS LOOKED CUZ 2 HIM I WAS CUTE@ JUS NINE
    MOM SAID **** MAYBE FROM FEAR OR DATS HA HUSBAND
    AS A LITTLE GURL I NEVER REALLY DID LEARN TO TRUST HIM
    WHEN DARKNESS FELL IT WAS OUR TIME...
    OUR SECRET TIME TO GROPE N SWEAT AS HED GRIND
    I BECAME EVIL EVERY THING I WAS TOLD ID DO DA OPPOSITE
    EVEN AS AN ADULT DAT MECHANISM STILL EXISTS
    I HATE THIS CYCLE BUT IT JUST NEVER ENDS
    LESBIAN DID A TOUR IN IRAQ N GOT DONE IN
    MY MIND BODY N SOUL IS SEEMINGLY WARPED
    CALLED ON GOD BUT INSTEAD LUCIFER OFFERED HIS WARMTH
    IM CURIOUS ALLAH WERES MY GUARDIAN ANGEL IM COLD
    SMART AS A WHIP BUT PSYCHOLOGICALLY CRIPPLED
    LIKED A TORN BUILDING IT FEELS AS IF IM CONDEMNED
    I AINT GOT **** NO FAMILY ****TY ARMY NO FRIENDS
    MANY NIGHTS U'VE WATCHED ME HURT FROM WUT U PUT ME THRU
    FAITH IN WHO? HELL YEAH U WOULD CURSE EM TOO

    when my headache clears ill pick it up...im empty all energy is gone
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sheik:
    I could feel your pain in this piece.
    Don't give up or in. One day it won't
    feel so bad. Nice write poet.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your not lonely your friends are never far away. just keep your head up. remember what i told you im your friend.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    keeping it all together is the key !
     
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    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the advice n shoulders guys im grateful to have such a honest outlet like u all
     
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    I offer you nothing but warmth and acceptance for it seems like it's been a mighty tough race for you. But you have the strength to endure so keep running and know i'll be there to pull you along when things seem to be to tough. sending you lots of love :hearts4: my sister.
     
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