Black Poetry : A Young Sinners Cry

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  1. PrincessFlowz

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    I began to look into her brown eyes
    through them I saw her innocence
    but suddenly she began to cry
    she wiped tears and held out her hand for me to hold
    her body was warm, her soul cold
    I'd heard some things about her
    the majority of them negative
    she looked to the ground and she told me
    things about her life and
    her desire not to live
    Little lost black girl
    all caught up in this confusing world
    a world she definately cant handle
    holding out her hand
    patiently waiting for someone to take hold but
    she keeps opening her legs
    searching for love, but her soul is sold
    This child is only looking for guidance
    she tries to see God
    but she's blinded by the sun
    and caught in a lusty trance
    This girl sounds familiar
    I know who this girl be
    I am she who writes the poems
    cuz these poems be me.
     
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    Hey, Everyone..I've been gone for a while but I'm back now...I hope you enjoy!
     
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    yeah yeah....deep flow girl....
    i totally get whut you saying...
    don't change now princess.....

    one love!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey welcome back we miss u
    dis was very nice scribe
    flow head on mo! mo ! mo !
     
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    Thanx Lurk and Rich for ur support...Love ya
     
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    hiya princess :wave: i know u dont know me I'm fairly new but this is somethin beautiful :) and I'm glad ya back :)
     
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    Triniti I feel like I know you cuz everyone here on Destee is family...I'm newer than you lol. I've only been on here since June. Thank you for your blessings, I truly appreciate them.
     
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    this was an incredibly touching piece.......your pen flows real
     
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