Black Poetry : a yo shawty...

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a yo shawty... can i holla at u fo a min
    u got a man...
    no..why...
    why a butiful gurl like u single now and days.....

    to be honest
    y am i
    i tend to ask mysef the same quest shun...
    and this is what i came up wit...


    im sorry but
    i maybe single but..
    im wit someone...
    but we r not 2gether ...

    he walks wit me
    as won
    but we r not togehter....

    he listens to me
    answers me
    but yet we r still not...
    together...

    he feeds me
    breaths with and
    threw me
    but we are not won
    we're not togehter...

    for i am in love wit
    his grace
    the way he knos how to
    embrace
    me when i need him
    he's there
    but we r not one
    we're not together...

    he sleeps beside me
    each night
    we love each other
    dont bicker and fight
    i grow wit him
    for he guides me
    he's became so close
    and clear to me
    but yet he's not here...
    and we are not 2gether...
    we r not one

    i dont have 2 speak...
    for he listens to my
    nothings
    as he touches my heart
    his eyes can read the
    words scribed on it
    are etched wit letters
    strokes
    of his love.....
    he does so much...
    for me...
    to me...
    but we are not 2gether...
    we have yet 2 b come one...

    he's my better have
    that have that makes me soul whole
    somin im not
    i aint...
    cuz we have yet to
    to be together...
    but won day we
    will be...
    one.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff on point i love this piece
    flow head on sistah daroc .........
     
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    Together, but not claiming each other, even though you encompass each other's spirit. I liked the vibe of this.
     
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    I felt this from the very first word ...to the last. well it's like saying:
    "I'm alone...but I'm never lonely" ...very nice drop...keep dropping.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    this helps me see an energy filled conviction and focus
    and belief in self...
    "but we will be"....not a victim a true survivor..
    nice....
     
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    throwing up my Diamond 4 this one sis do ya thing! :jumping:
     
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    I got the ebonics plague once daroc went hot
    Ain't no other sage knocks me out 'da box!!!
     
  8. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall

    1poetsought: thanx for da laf
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No sweat daroc

    One love ~ :blush:
     
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    tight flow Daroc
    this got my immediate attention
    cause i was gettin' ready to ask a
    shawty da same thang yestaday
    just before the dude pulled up :madd:

    she was all of it too...
     
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