Quiet Poetry Lounge : A Write Collaboration

[PLATINUMILLITY1]

Me and Ibrahim did this collab together
I hope ya like!..........



Ibrahim says:

JUST A VOICE
AT FIRST IT WAS JUST A VOICE
A VOICE OF INTRODUCTION AND GRATITUDE
AT FIRST IT WAS JUST A VOICE
A VOICE THAT SAID “HI” AND OFFERED FRIENDSHIP
AT FIRST IT WAS JUST A VOICE
A VOICE SO WARM AND SWEET
AT FIRST IT WAS JUST A VOICE
A VOICE I WANTED TO HEAR MORE AND MORE
AT FIRST IT WAS JUST A VOICE
A VOICE I LONG SO MUCH TO SEE
AT FIRST IT WAS JUST A VOICE
A VOICE I HEARD AND WHOSE FACE I SAW
A VOICE THAT MAKES MY HEART MISS A BEAT
A VOICE THAT MAKES ME SAY TO MYSELF “I’M IN LOVE”


Platinumillity Responds:

Wow........
At first ...It must be a dream
At first????
Hard to believe
First was me.....I see
First I was alone
First I think I was shown

I think first their was you and me
Laugh and love
My voice Iyyy Beeee
First I was a seed
A voice of mystery
Someone you saw First
To give these words....me

Love....new Life
Words of a new kind
Light of entrance
Of you to me
First I though this can not be
First I could not believe
My First anomaly
At first from the voice and words of Sweet I.B.

 

[FaithSoulSistah]

That is nice Platinum.

 

[PLATINUMILLITY1]

Thank You FaithSoulSistah
Good to see you

 

[$$RICH$$]

wow y'all this was tyte and i use too love collaborating with someone
been a long time for me and to see y'all doing it made me smile

by the way sis i have something for u ....an offer

 

[watzinaname]

I really enjoyed this collab you two, I liked the way you posed that slow build up to a love. Great job!