Black Poetry : A worthy investment?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by asimplepoet, Mar 29, 2010.

  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We've been spending time for a while

    And as you know time is priceless

    So the time I've spent with you

    Has been part of an investment

    And now I'm taking time to reaccess

    Evaluating the worth of this union

    I want to know. . .

    Is my investment profitable?

    What's the values of my returns?

    Is this a long-term commitment?

    Or is this a short-term venture?

    Ultimately is all this worth anything?

    Or should I consider reinvesting?
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can surely relate to this piece, I enjoyed the read. :toast:
     
  3. hexzerg

    hexzerg Banned MEMBER

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    Not sure if you were asking for an investment or not. However, you can never go wrong with gold or silver!
     
  4. Khasm13

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    great analogy in this flow poet....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    This was :terrific: Sister ASP!

    Yes, yes, yes!.....Before you "sign the dotted line" with your heart and life, you don't want no "adjustable rate."-----You want one that is "locked in!"


    Great piece! :toast:
     
  6. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Asimplepoet – Between the initial investment and the yield of that investment are the compliments and tears, the respecting and honoring, the kissing and loving, the cuddling and teasing, the wining and dining, the holding and listening, the standing-by and supporting and a trip to the end of the Earth if anything’s been forgotten. These elements which when measured and quantified bring added clarity to any human valuation. Love this work asimplepoet. It has it own poetic clarity which only the poet’s hand delivers. HH
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sis this one said a lot and the investment made could be a big and great return
    and maybe a bad lost......I'm indeed relating to this kinda made me wonder
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin this one back....
     
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