Black Poetry : A Woman's Heart

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  1. Allthemanuneed

    Allthemanuneed New Member MEMBER

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    A Woman’s Heart

    A Woman’s Heart

    Don’t tell her she’s pretty,
    or even tell her she’s phyne.
    Don’t bring her any gifts,
    and she won’t give you the time.

    Show her that you don’t care,
    keep playing with her heart.
    Continue to dance around her feelings,
    and she will keep you in the dark.

    Keep coming home with the scene of perfume,
    never check your car, for planted ear rings.
    Don’t think she won’t check your wallet,
    divorce papers is what she will bring.

    Start telling her she’s pretty,
    and don’t forget to tell her she’s phyne.
    Start bringing her gifts,
    and maybe, she would give you the time.

    Show her that you do really care,
    be more sensitive to her heart.
    Realize she’s a woman with feelings,
    and maybe she will bring you out of the dark.

    Never step out on her ever again,
    if I were you, I would surprise her with a ring.
    Keep only her picture in your wallet,
    and maybe, your name she will start to sing.

    A woman’s heart is like a vault,
    if it’s open to you, then you’re in.
    It takes allot for her to close her heart,
    once you’re out, you’ve forever lost a friend.

    Written by allthemanuneed©
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hello Allthemanuneed .......
    this not a place to post poetry but the forum where poet of the week go only
    maybe you didn't notice where you was posting it at but i will move it to the right
    forum in (poetry get your flow on ) in the future do notice where and what forum you in
    thank you for understanding in advance
    $R
     
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    A woman’s heart is like a vault,
    if it’s open to you, then you’re in.
    It takes allot for her to close her heart,
    once you’re out, you’ve forever lost a friend.



    love the ending so true...nice write
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so beautifull...




    yes ones its like that ...


    the love is :sand:


    beautifull written poet...



    bring us more..





    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems such a simple thing to know, how much a heart appreciates kindness and will reciprocate in turn, yet some want to make it as difficult as rocket science. This was on point poet.
     
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