Quiet Poetry Lounge : A Woman's Final Temptation...

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  1. 1Sexy_Beauty

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    breathe girl...breathe...
    don’t let your mind wonder about his size
    breathe girl...breathe...
    don’t make contact with his eyes
    your happily in love and happily taken
    so this sudden urge to make love to him is solely mistaken
    breathe girl...breathe...
    this is only a test of your fate
    exhale girl...and breathe...
    your gonna be making love to him at this rate
    come on girl...remember...
    you’ve got a perfect...loving man
    you’ve got to girl...remember...
    that you wear his promise on your left hand
    slower girl...breathe...
    his confident steps are gettin’ closer
    please...don’t receive...
    his sensuously scented aroma
    just close your eyes girl...and breathe...
    you know you can’t be tempted this way
    just turn around girl...and leave
    you love your man too much to be led astray....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee's house of love
    welcome from da flyte Man above
    welcome wit open vibe
    lovin ya solo scribe welcome within

    dis was well posed !
    almost captured in a rapture of his passionate bliss
    continue flowin':heart:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    thanks for the welcome :)........i'll make sure to read some of your posts
     
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    Thank u ................continue flowin coz temptation cast a final hour
     
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    that was hot. God Bless
     
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    That was Hot

    that was a powerful piece and i know alot of females that can use that one keep em' comin'
     
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    Wow...Just goes to show how imperfect human beings are. Having feelings of lust, anger, and jealousy is natural. But it's more important that you don't act on those feelings.

    Your piece is real deal.
     
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    thanks for the love everybody.... :)
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    1Sexy_Beauty

    This poem had me :lol: at

    It was as if I could hear you saying this to her...coaching her to breathe. And, I've never heard your voice. :lol:

    I've actually seen women panting as if they needed to breathe slowly...wanting after a man. I was stunned. I don't know why, but...

    Nice, very nice.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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