Black Poetry : A Woman With A Mended Heart

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby me and u been talkin 4 quite some time,
    And i'm ready to make u mine,
    I want 2 cherish u, and willing to become da 1 4 u,
    U're da 1 who i share my ups and downs with,
    Cause i can only count on u,
    U mended my heart back in place,
    U give me a good sense of security,
    U still bring me joy into my life,
    U always stood by my side,
    Whenever i was down,
    Or whenever i needed a friend close by,
    U were there 4 me,
    We can have a good life 2getha,
    Only me and u 4ever,
    I promise 2 be loyal and kind,
    Honest, sincere, and 2 treat u right,
    U're my moon, and i'm ya star,
    I hope u feel da same way about me,
    Come 2 me wheneva u need me,
    Don't be afraid to tell me anything,
    2 be open always with ya mind,
    And neva hold back ya feelings of me inside,
    If u can promise those things,
    Then me and u will have everything,
    Each other,
    We'll be more than just lovers,
    More than anything,
    We'll make it,
    I admire u truly i do,
    I need u, as crazy as u do,
    I believe in u,
    I believe in us,
    We'll have a happy life,
    We'll bring each other strife,
    We'll survive,
    I want u 2 hold me whenever i want 2 be holded,
    2 touch me when i need to be touched,
    A shoulder to lean on,
    When i xpress my feelings,
    I'll do da same in return 2 u,
    2 be truthfully,
    Respect u and 2 hear u out closely,
    Listen with my earz open,
    Wipe away your tears when u cry,
    Take away the pain,
    And guide u luv beyond da way.:heart:
     
  2. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a beautiful dedication, what a feeling of connection that can take you through good and bad times. i hope the one this is for has read it, this is a make-my-day type poem.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now dat's how to share life and love
    u posed a masterpiece of sweetness
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now I know that I have been MIA for a while
    but have you gone and fallen in luv or something
    next time let a brother know (lol)
     
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    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was a deep poem keep up the good flo


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    we are as strong as we won't to be.....
     
  6. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4 Sho

    Thanks ya'll 4 givin me ya'll support and 2 da new destee family members, i'll be lookin out 4 ya.

    1 luv,

    AM
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    This was nice...very nice. *sigh*

    To be loved...to be loved...ohhhhh what a feeling, to be in loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

    lol
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4 sho monetary i bring nothin but da best what luv has ta offer. Showin luv 4rm da sista herself.

    AM
     
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