Quiet Poetry Lounge : A WOMAN SCORNED

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    I am gentle and harmless
    in my flower like form

    But as deadly as venom
    when I represent a woman scorned

    I am your secret
    In the erotics of the night

    I am the circle of heat and friction
    That represents your right

    I am your passions back fire
    When your intent is corrupt

    I am the fire that comsumes you
    When my volcano errupts

    I am the embrace that encompasses you
    When my love is not deceived

    Hurt, I am the fury of hell
    That brings you to your knees

    I am the hurricane of wind
    With the knowledge that I can carry or destroy

    I am a soft wisper in your ear
    Asking if you want sweet pain or prefer sour joy

    I am the butterfly
    that flies far above your head

    I am the spider that traps you
    And then leaves you for dead

    I am that yin and yang also the virgin in a wife
    I am just as seductively sexy as the mistress of the night

    I am a secret untold just an undefined act
    I am you pusher when I take over I am more deadly then crack

    I am weakened when I stand as the rib of your comfort
    I am strength as the inspiration of the melody u play on my trumphet

    I am your completion
    and I am your start

    I am your desire
    To do in the dark

    I am the dream of bliss that you wish
    I am every woman that you think doesn't exist

    I must be so therefore I am
    For better or worse I'm you right hand womb-man

    They show'd me a choice but I chose not to part
    I am one with my source so I remain a secret to find in your heart.
     
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    whoaaaaa! u are deadly as the night
    to scorn ya heart will set off a fight
    u are rays of destruction
    don't worry i won't scorn ya affection

    I will take that pain the scar dats scorn
    caress it and bring new life like a new born
    i wll tenderly hold and whisper comforting
    set the sail to da land of everlasting
    I will compromise to never scorn
    so you wouldn't raise them horns

    let me creep out this place before u look upon my face
    that was some heavy hitting and deep scribing about a woman scorn !
     
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    and then came the beam of light woman, and the pain that connected from the earth to the womb, I screamed as I entered light, I felt my mother pain as I flowed through the womb, so who am I to cry, by the wound is much to deep, Know man will know the pain and hurt, they call me scorned, but my name is angry black woman, know more shall I feel the pain.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Never play with fire, it can become uncontrollable when underestimated. Many forget that. Well written piece, as per your usual.
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    so what u wanna go half on a baby den! lol

    thanks for the flow.... :)
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    oight now

    exactly!
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    thanks you Sister Watz..... means much as I love ur work also....
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    intent is not to scorn
    not to do you wrong
    you move like rhythm in a song
    word is bond

    you know them streets can get pitiful
    you want fun and things can get critical
    you're too great for me to look at you as minuscule
    you are like no other
    there is no carbon copy
    you are the original
     
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    I am the "Alfa and the Omega"
    I brought the darkness, to the light
    I brought you Man...to eternal life
    there is nothing more deadly, than a woman scorn
    Mainly because from our womb, ...you were born!

    I just love how you dropped that bomb poet, excellent piece!!​
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    overall intent
    is the pain in my song
    it's not the streets i fear
    I know the way we've been wronged

    but not the micro
    we represent the macro
    I know what lies in men's hearts
    even if they don't know what is actual

    this isn't about me this is about us
    and our survival
    my womb's to conceive
    a black woman's smile

    I know that I'm beautiful
    got my own style
    but i need to bond
    with the sisters for a while

    they never told me
    but i know that it's true
    I'm divided from at least three sisters
    because they have feelings for you

    I offer my essence
    please dwell in my circle
    but i can only protect u
    if u don't let me hurt u
     
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