Black Poetry : A woman in love

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  1. sraheem2

    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dedicated to Sweet p/e & Miss A with much respect and from my :heart:


    A woman in love is a song

    she moves to a rhythm
    only she can feel
    her body remembers the weight of
    her lover & every measure of the
    beats..they create when making love

    I love watching the movement of a woman in love

    when she speaks, her voice sings
    the melody of her lover in 4 part harmony
    mesmerizing every ear under the sound
    of her… filling us with her music

    I love listening to a woman in love

    she smiles from deep places
    and when she writes, her pen unlocks
    her inner wellspring and her joy
    is revealed

    I love reading a woman in love

    the transformation of a woman
    from beautiful to “beyond description”
    when touched by the hand of love
    excites us all…

    opening our eyes, to “see”

    Her glow pervades the darkness
    filling empty souls, quenching thirsty minds

    she reaches out, inspires…and yes,
    she captures me

    Saleem
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bruh!!!

    Top Notch!!!!! Excellent drop hea!!!

    Reas
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful read of one of life's most treasured experiences...A woman in love.

    BE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyght scribe poet da love of a woman
     
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    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas... the task is easy when the ladies are top notch, my brotha. Thanks for the read.

    BE... and you know this. Just my way of saying "thanks". "Thanks".

    $$RICH$$, brotha, the pleasure is all mine.


    Saleem
     
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    given da love is da goal
    and to set one's Queeneth like a black pearl
    to shine like diamonds da essence of heart is felt
    within her soul surely ya way to say thankz is of her
     
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    Brotha Peace,

    This is beautifully written. Thank you for your acknowledgement of and appreciation for the ways of love, and the way it fuels the power of the flow!

    alyce
     
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    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss A... I appreciate your appreciation of my appreciation. It's real.

    Saleem
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    saleem... saleem... saleem...


    you have an amazing way with words! as it has been
    previous-ly stated... this was beautiful-ly written... so
    i'll just add "fantastic" & get on outta the way for the
    next poet to reply. :)

    "sweet p/e"... thanks you for continuing to read&enjoy
    her work. :D

    itsallLove, chile.
     
  10. sraheem2

    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Elayne, I'll always read and enjoy the words of "sweet p/e".
    You are most welcome.

    Stay...just...like...that... :)

    Saleem
     
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