Black Poetry : ~ A Woman I Met ~

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  1. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alight, check this out....
    Im gettin' at this brown sugar Queen the other day at the bus stop,
    The sista is bangin', sweet as honey
    Now we hittin' it off makin' good conversation....
    Her bus came, so I gave her my phone number hoping that she'll call..
    As soon as I get home, I check my voice messages...
    Dayum, she hasn't called yet..
    So, I decide to just chill and wait.
    Put on some Miles Davis, smoke a little herb and relax...
    30 minutes later my phone rings, I look on the caller I.D..it was her,
    So I picked up.. "Peace my Empress",
    We ended up having a long conversation..
    I mean, we had the most in common
    I thought we were soul mates, and we are both Leos,
    She asked if I would like to come over, Im like sure..

    So I hop on the subway,
    within 45 minutes Im standing in front of her apartment with
    Some flowers, I take a deep breath and knock...
    She looks threw her peep whole, opens up and gives me a hug...
    I gave her the flowers,
    She thanx me then offers me somthing to drink,
    I said sure....

    Im sitting back looking around her place,
    diggin' the vibes, Jill Scott playing in the back ground
    Incense and Candles burning,
    Crib is Afrocentrically decorated, but what really set it off
    was the abstract painting of Bob Marley she had on her wall..
    I was also peepin' her book shelf, this sista had books
    from Zora Neale Hurston to Maya Angelou..I nodded, yeah she is kool
    with me...

    So she came back with some green ice tea,
    and we started to engage into an interesting
    conversation about "Love" as we looked deeply
    into each other's eyes..
    The vibe in the atmosphere was so intense
    That she started to message my goatee
    as I ran my hands threw her locs....
    Next thing you know, we started lip-locking,
    And one thing led to another.....
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    some meeting my brother..thanks for sharing this one....you laid it nice
    i was looking for more when i got to the end..as always love your style
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Very tight, brothah. I could see you readin this at a poetry slam or somethin.
     
  4. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx for the love sistah. I thought I should have added some more but I was trying to leave something to the imagination. Peace and love.



    Thank you sis, I apprieciate that. Much love. One.
     
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    word....this was a tyte drop my man....
    and ol gurl sounds buttery from da mental on down...
    keep scribe'n
    one love
    khasm
     
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    You definitely had quite a fruitful experience out of that meeting. And the way you posed this, it's as though the reader could just peek thru that window at ya'll....I enjoyed this.
     
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    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm how's it goin' bruh? Yeah the sista is sweet. Been talkin to her ALOT lately. We might actually hook up. Thanx for the love brotha man. peace.





    Thank you sister. I try to create a clear picture for the audience and yes the experience was fruitful. One love.
     
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    all in da beat ............tyte drop here
     
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    Thanx brotherman, appreiciate the comments.
     
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    Tyte Piece, on point
     
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