Black Poetry : A winner with knowledge should enter college

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, May 29, 2012.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A winner with knowledge should enter college

    Had mad chances but after bad romances and garbage

    Steered me wrong now here at home trying to make

    Ends meet don’t know when I’m gonna eat steak

    Fiddle through the night with little light had to revamp

    My lamp abused my eyes and used replies became cramped

    Trying to justify this must be fly and brisk and put my

    Eyeglasses on or take back spins with contact lens try

    To see, my plan great like a candidate must debate stuff

    And issues blow my nose huff and puff on tissues had enough

    Of the nonsense, my pledge is swift stand on the edge

    Of cliffs shooked renowned and looked down the ledge

    Of a 1,000 feet deep abyss which is freak and brisk yall

    Disaster and paraphanalia plus after failure after failure

    Threw me into worration, now juggling and struggling

    To get on my feet, look I kick it wearing bling puzzling

    Like a wicked king because cats hate me when great you

    See legal evil, even a Beagle Hound knows a feeble clown

    When he sees one, no limit here it’s a academic year around

    Here so school starts and fools depart that’s the cool part

    About going to class you growing fast obey the rules be smart

    Even an unknown jerk does his or her homework now taking

    Complex looks at textbooks won’t be the next crook I’m making

    My life worth while my girl may birth a child someday
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi rhymebad, this was really awesome. Keep your focus going, The best fight in life is the come back. Feeling you strong on this.
    Peace and Love:grouphug:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bruh you droppin heat here on da real like how u flip this piece
     
  4. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow thanks for the props on this for real yall got to keep on doing me
     
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