Black Poetry : A Wife's Lamentation (Part. 1)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he was a failure,
    with a beer-belly and a wife-beater
    hugging his purtruding stomach...
    his own pockets were void of anything
    that even phatiomed that he has or had
    money to fill his dollah sto' wallet...
    and he wondered why his "wife" cried
    50,000 nights of frustration
    that strained her voice and breath...
    and love...

    she would remember the many tymes she would search
    the streets in search of a LoVe void at home...
    while her "husband" slobbed on himself while alseep,
    with a bottle of hennesy tipping off his fingers...
    drip...
    drop...
    drip...
    drop...

    sometymes the rain would soothed
    her when she was lonely
    becuz her "huzbands" touch
    was soo vulgur to there soul..
    it seemed to strip it bare... :puke:

    she wanted to scream, cry, kick,
    whine, suffocate him in her sleep,
    yet all she could do was,
    sob silently wondering when the Sun
    would peek through the window
    and stop hiding from her ***...

    pain sent streaks of red
    that pasted her i-lids and traveled
    her spine...

    she knew what would depress
    if she stayed in this house...

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmmmm! this was a sweet release and i feel
    the tummy bear .....u really bring it sweet
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love rich....
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    I have seen these kind of husbands everyday and everywhere. They need to be on an island all by themselfs...with :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: 's all around them. No woman deserve this.
    very good scribe keep it comming :cool:
    sendiing u luv...queentswana
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...thanks sistah i agree with the bombs...its this a tragic state we live in...the good for nothin dogs...lol
    :heart:
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    A life like that is a prison, and the solution she uses is unfortunately another cell. You write with an insight beyond your years, another deep drop here.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love watz....:wave:
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