Black Poetry : A Wet Dream

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Wet Dream

    She is the age of maturity, sexuality, and confidents,
    Teasing me with her thoughts of sensuality,
    Taunting me with her seductive vibration
    Which send me to believe that this is only a fantasy
    And I’m hoping that my fantasy becomes a reality
    Filed with normality,
    She implants visions of stimulating erections
    Causing me to give her every bit of my manhood,
    Injecting her with affection and compassion.
    She is mentally feeding me with thoughts of impurity.
    I have to have her,
    No, I need to have her.
    But how can I have her
    If I physically have not seen her.
    She is a vision of my subconscious,
    Calling me.
    But as my sub consciousness is merging
    With my consciousness,
    Her face began to bear fruit.
    And I became hungry for her.
    I could taste the fruits of her passion seducing me.
    Her luscious lips began to travel
    Into places that caused explosions inside of me.
    With every single touch,
    She made me moan,
    With every single lick
    She mad me groan,
    With every stroke of her finger tips
    She made me tingle and forget
    That she was only a dream of my sub consciousness
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  2. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte poem! Keep em coming!
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A soaker. Truly a good wet dream.

    I have to have her,
    No, I need to have her.

    This is strong passion thru out the post.

    Now when you see the dream in front of you. Tell us Defiantson what will you do? Will you clam up in awe, not able to speak a word. It happens I know and this is what I heard. Break it out in simular fashion.
     
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    Earftones Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOh Defianson you are nasty!!! Just Kidding I really enjoyed your poem tho
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am truely enjoying your work...this was sweet nice

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop poet
     
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    re:Wet

    Very nice poem of emotional longing.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hungry for her love, huh poet? Now this was sensual with a capital S. Do flow on.
     
  9. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First and formost I want to thank all of you. Now the question was asked what would I do with it if it was in front of me.

    Well simple, I would sharish it until the end of days
    respect it with a love that god can only implace in me
    give her my mind, spirit, soul, and body
    to do as she pleases
    I would make her my resperator
    just so that I can breath
    I would not freeze up
    and allow another to take my place
    I would.... be her every fantasy
    only to show her how much
    she really means to me
    I would take her pain
    and make it my own
    I would take her tears
    only to want them to rool out of my eyes
    her smile would become
    the smile of God as she smiles at me
    she could do no wrong
    for she would be me
    and I would be her
    not separated but as a unit of one.
    That is what I would if she was infront of me.

    Mannie
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    Defiantson,

    I've never met you but this Wet Dream peice is simply beautiful. It reminds me of the song Sun dress, ( I went out and brought two sun dresses after that song came out, hahaha) you give women a glimps into your mind, the effect women have on men and I think that is incrediably powerful. Thank you for letting us see that. Thanks for sharing, beautiful

    Remby :toast:
     
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