Black Poetry : A wet Dream

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Wet Dream

    She is the age of maturity, sexuality, and confidents,
    Teasing me with her thoughts of sensuality,
    Taunting me with her seductive vibration
    Which send me to believe that this is only a fantasy
    And I’m hoping that my fantasy becomes a reality
    Filed with normality,

    She implants visions of stimulating erections
    Causing me to give her every bit of my manhood,
    Injecting her with affection and compassion.
    She is mentally feeding me with thoughts of impurity.

    I have to have her,
    No, I need to have her.
    But how can I have her
    If I physically have not seen her.
    She is a vision of my subconscious,
    Calling me.

    But as my sub consciousness is merging
    With my consciousness,
    Her face began to bear fruit.
    And I became hungry for her.
    I could taste the fruits
    of her passion seducing me.

    Her luscious lips began to travel
    Into places that caused
    explosions inside of me.
    With every single touch,
    She made me moan,
    With every single lick
    She mad me groan,
    With every stroke of her finger tips
    She made me tingle and forget
    That she was only a dream
    of my sub consciousness.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A dream that you very vividly brought to life with your choice of words. Very sensual piece, and smoothly flowed poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwwww! is that what it's call !!!
    this was passion heat within itself .....
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE DROP if she can do all that wait until you've met thet one who will make you yearn the burning desire will burn even brighter then. I liked this one I look forward to reading more from you.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was nice, makes ya wanna just hang out in a "comatose" state of mind.
    thanks for sharing a part of your world.
     
  6. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was writen about some chick I knew. It (oops) was great too. Did I just say that. LOL :smooch: :smokin:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just thought that everyone would enjoy this. Thanks for letting me know you did.
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Twist, but like Coca Cola says there's nothing like the real thing.
    good write though
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She rocked the Defiant one's world off it's axis! :jump:

    Good jump, Son :court:
     
  10. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appriciate you for that and yeah she had me. Thanks for the love.
     
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