Quiet Poetry Lounge : A Welcoming Kiss

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Apr 27, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me kiss you
    and as I do
    let me linger within
    the softness of
    your Nubian skin
    Drinking in lips sweet and luscious
    dripping of sparkling wine
    tongues longing to taste, exploring
    yours savoring mine
    as we gently caress
    and hold each other tight
    mellow in each others warmth
    delicious in our delight
    A kiss that will leave us thinking
    of nothing else for days to come
    It will be the way that our hearts
    will say hello and then some
    Just pondering this
    what would be our first kiss...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like the first touch as one partake in the melon
    of sweet rapture kiss ...........this sound so good ummm!
     
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    whhhheeeewwww!! now i gotta go call sumbody! very nice poet!
     
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    Now that's a kiss, oh how well I use to sing that tune...and it was well worth the "lip lock" ...lol
    nice piece, I enjoyed reading this, I been there, and yes it will linger for days.
     
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    Kiss me... a thousand times more, my love.
     
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    *wiping the sweat from my brow*
    you sure painted a picture here
    there's nothing more sultry than
    a perfectly painted picture
    of a kiss...brewing with all
    the goodness that love can
    bring and as the poem said
    "and then some"...

    enjoyed the read sis!
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, that welcoming kiss does sound good brotha Rich, thank you.
    Lol@ Floreal, ring em up, thank you for your response poet.
    It does linger for days queent, thank you sis appreciated.
    Can't have too many of those kisses 1poet, thank you brotha.
    Thank you sage for letting me know you felt this picture painted by words, appreciated very much.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome poetess
    kisses bring love deeper
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They certainly do Rich, thanks again brotha poet.
     
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