Black Poetry : A VOICE OF STRUGGLE

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  1. sofasscotton

    sofasscotton Member MEMBER

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    She didn't see the Angel because of
    darkness that blocked the light in her life...
    The whispers of a pure voice she didn't hear
    because she spoke so devilishly loud...
    The two creators of her flesh she disrespected
    without a care and concern...
    Selfishness led her down the wrong road
    when she knew the right path was righteous
    and denied a chauffeur to eternity...
    lost in the wilderness of her mind blinds
    her reality...
    Allowing greed to take over her integrity
    rested her in peace long ago...
    Stumbling over the same block and knowing
    it's there hurts her the most, because every
    time she gets up she acts like she never fell.
    Confusion overwhelms her soul in a state
    of shock, to the point of no return...
    "Can someone tell me how to forgive to be
    forgiven" she asks silently inside...
    When the Angel appeared in a mistful
    vision saying "open your eyes"... [/FONT
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    :smooch:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    Tyte drop nice flow do visit others poet's
    and share some love as love is given happy
    you hear to share and flow within welcome
    to the family of destee.com ......poet! :welldone:
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    beside i notice you have the same piece twice i'll happily
    remove the second one do make your self at home .......
     
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    Yes, please remove both of them, there is a total of three. I hell, this computer is more handicapped than I am. lol

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    thank you for understanding and again welcome to destee's
    do hope you enjoy and stay awhile upon us poeticly .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The biggest struggle can be the struggle within self, we tend to trip our own selves up. Welcome to destee, I look forward to enjoying more of your flows.
     
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    sofasscotton Member MEMBER

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    Thanks, I got a whole lot more where that comes from. My homegirl, lexuslady got me hooked up to this site.
     
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    this the place to be to share love and recieve love
    happy you was told about us and our many growth


    do take time and visit our Poetic Etiquette Rules at the top
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    thanks for such the warm welcome
     
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    Held captive....

    <appears suddenly>

    This poem drew me in from the very start, and I really love your use of metaphor, and the end, WONDERFULLY EXPRESSED!

    Excellent Work, and like they said...welcome to Destee

    keep the words moving

    peace&1luv

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    thanxs Legendof 1 spirit.....
    im happy this peice was able to move you as it does me. even though i wrote this months ago, everytime i recite this peice it still moves me.
     
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