Black Poetry : A Virgin's Vow

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  1. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll take my chances, and wait for real love
    What have I got to lose?
    I won't regret what never made it
    My innocence is precious
    That's why I save it
    And why some crave it
    And try to take it
    Point blank brake it
    But this is sacred
    Yet they still chase it
    Like this is a race and
    a competission
    That's why it's my mission to hold out
    Won't put out too early just so you can roll out
    Quietly stroll out
    Like a drop out
    While I'm knocked out
    Soakin' wet and
    so confused
    That right there is when regrets would really come
    When I'd look back like, **** that was really dumb
    But it's too late cuz what's done is done
    Leaving me with no one to blame but myself
    Not his popularity or his wealth
    Not his charm or his "good" intention
    And that it ain't for me is what he won't mention
    There's no rush or no deadlines
    The love I deserve will be mine
    All in due time
    Someone will appreciate me
    And see my quality
    Without defiling me
    to know when he's here,
    It'll take a while to see
    But it'll be worth the wait.


    -Roni
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed indeed !!!
    like dis scribe here
     
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    wonderful vow here
    likes this tight drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    wheres the applause button?...I liked this one very much:)
     
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    So very true.

    Your body is a temple, little sister, don't raze (demolish) it by unnecessary actions that U would later regret.

    Ask around, the majority of people who have done the deed are no longer with that person who was their 1st.

    Sex is supposed 2 be the means 2 truly express your union with your life's mate, which is why children are born from it, tying U 2 that person 4 the remainder of your life.
     
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    Loved this, the way it was written, and the message. Nothing wrong with just having someone get to know your mind.
     
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    it's very nice to see a young woman know her worth these days,
    especially the virgins...

    excellent...
    jh
     
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    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gracias a todos!

    thanks for the words you guys. i'm currently trying to work up the nerve to perform it somewhere. the feedback was greatly appreciated.


    Roni
     
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    Oh! :hot: Oh! :hot: Oh! :hot: Oh! :hot:

    Sista!!!! YOU CAN PERFORM IT HERE!!! ON VOICE CHAT!!!
    you got a mic then we gots the time :D
    it would be SO lovely for you to join us :)
    and where better for you to practice than among family :grouphug:
     
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    I feel this...

    :hearts4: I was the epitomie of this poem before I got married. I had those same fears and was just as determined as you...oh I was looking for a poem like this, but I could never find one so I wrote my own. Anyway I love it...your flow was there and you knew what you were trying to say. I can't say enough how I love this drop:bowdown:
     
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