Black Poetry : a virgin's plea

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Jan 10, 2003.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I await the day…when I can say:

    I was cold
    You gave me heat
    …of your heat

    Made me complete

    When I did thirst
    For the soothing nectar
    Of your womanly core

    You allowed me to drink

    When I hungered
    For nourishment
    Only you could give

    You allowed me to feed {on you}

    Is it make-believe
    A fantasy
    That spun these…these
    Unsatisfied wishes
    Of unnatural kisses
    Heaped upon one set of lips
    From another
    Then the others

    {sigh}

    I know well the heart of thee
    I can see
    A gentle soul
    Of which the whole
    Protects

    Will you be there for me?

    In my darkest hour
    As well as my most triumphant
    Moment

    Will you love me
    Hold…and caress me
    Bless me
    With the fruitage of your heart

    Will you take me to paradise
    …Show me what lies beyond
    The river of contentment

    ‘til we’re spent

    Will you…
    Make me a man?
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will you take me to paradise
    …Show me what lies beyond
    The river of contentment

    ‘til we’re spent

    Will you…
    Make me a man?

    woo

    real honest piece here

    nice work

    keep um comin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man Baller u hit some main points
    and open up sweet dreams to live by
    loved dis piece......
     
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    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    excellentay! (yes! that's a word!!) :tongue:

    mmm mmm mmm! now you know how i feel
    about love poetry... especially when a brotha
    be brangin' it!! :D thank you for this!!!

    (almost made me answer your question!) :lol:

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when one begins to write infrequently....the mind goes to more places of purity. nice piece.
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shoot after reading this

    how can she say no. I've always loved the way you did the dayum thang.




    One
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your ending surprised, yet tantillized....

    would that the sweet fruit of loins were enough to make one wo/man....

    but I love the thought of it!

    beauteous, brotha baller.... as always! New Year Blessings on ya!

    alyce
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    a virgin of love

    deep love here poet

    DSS
     
  9. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetic family
    many thanks for your response
    i haven't been around much...as of late
    and i'm only passing through, now.
    however, i do peek in...from time to time
    and know that love continues its abundant flow
    on the playground of Destee.:)

    love&manyblessings.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEAITIFUL INDEED!

    This was a masterpiece among love poems...glad you shared that side of you..."Missed you a bunch!"

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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