Black Poetry : a victim's pain...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anger
    .
    .
    .
    Blood red daggers of
    Rage
    Sweeping over hazy yesterdays
    Of
    A Victim’s Pain

    Pulsating
    Again and again
    Like a heartbeat
    Spreading sin
    In this world I live in

    Why?

    WHY?

    Deep in meditation
    I cry
    Wave after wave
    Of frustrated emotion
    Rain down upon me
    As I test the depths
    Of my pain

    A Victim

    Of intentional falsehoods
    That cut like
    Knives
    Lies
    Torched my soul
    Shredded my
    Heart

    Pain

    Cruisin’ down the
    Highways and byways
    Of troubled days
    So many ways
    For hurt to knock
    Upon the door
    To my soul

    This Rage
    Blood red daggers of
    .
    .
    .
    Yesterday's anger.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uncontrollable almost....

    and this piece it on hit!!
    If you can't control anger,
    it definitely will control you!!

    Feelin' this scribe to death!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed anger can take u under...
    tyte drop uppin this one.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, it can take you under, if you let it. Feeling this piece here...
     
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