Black Poetry : A Verbal Tour

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcomes come forth, to all the weary souls,
    wary from living, with no control
    over a world that constantly sends in circles
    those who wander its grounds…
    so, sit back, relax,
    and saunter the walkways of my mind,
    as I poetically seek
    to impart
    the tools to find
    us both some
    sweet release,
    attempting to cease, completely, the annoying calls
    of
    frustration,
    disappointment,
    lack of elation….
    let’s both take a leisure stroll,
    let’s call it a verbal tour
    inside
    a place called joy,
    filled with nothing but pleasure…
    please, sit back,
    buckle up,
    enjoy the ride…

    let’s explore…
    love, that rushes like blue waves across sand,
    majestically massaging each grain
    of worked up souls,
    until the mind/body/whole being
    smiles

    let’s explore…
    cool evenings where the warmth of
    camaraderie blankets
    your thoughts,
    good friends all around
    to help ease
    the troubles of the day

    let’s explore…
    romance, dripping from lips
    like raindrops from trees,
    an overwhelming wetness,
    the tingling breeze
    of
    two hearts connected
    as one

    let’s explore…
    ecstasy…love’s intimate bindings,
    warm bodies intertwined,
    minds sensuously roaming,
    fingers tracing exotic patterns,
    skin frozen…
    in climactic anticipation

    let’s explore…
    the uninhibited bliss of
    small children at play,
    the presents most precious gifts,
    teaching us how to
    appreciate life,
    growing into their role as
    the voice of tomorrow

    let’s explore…
    family,
    life’s most sacred connection…
    they cry together,
    they laugh together,
    the unbreakable links
    in a chain,
    that, even when rusted,
    the bond remains…

    let’s explore…
    life, and all its little joys,
    things we take for granted,
    one more meal,
    a chance to see sunrise,
    blue rivers,
    green grass,
    life itself…

    it’s something to think about


    so, goodbye,
    to souls, that I hope I’ve comforted,
    who, even though this world
    is out of your control,
    can grasp hold to the reins
    of something
    you have power over,
    your joy,
    your happiness,
    your satisfaction,
    because the trials of the world,
    while they’re a stressing distraction,
    can’t take away
    the simple joy
    of enjoying
    being alive
     
  2. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was a wonderful tour!

    "because the trials of the world,
    while they’re a stressing distraction,
    can’t take away
    the simple joy
    of enjoying
    being alive"

    HERE, HERE!!
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    absolutely soulgood!

    thank you :)


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwww mannnnnnnnnn!

    This was soooooooooooo goooooooooooood!
    Like gentle rain you washed my gutter's clean.
    Like someone sweet and tender you made me
    forget everything and everyone mean...if just for
    a little while...You made me smile!!!!!!!! :thanks:

    Blessings on Your House! :peace:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe ya pen been missed
    happy to read u again wow !!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was marvelous, just encompassed so much joy of life...where is this poet now?
     
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    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely put, your mind and your pen has been enjoyed....

    praise
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MM hmmm....

    This was definitely a peace piece, so completely true in it's entirety.
     
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