Black Poetry : A Valentine Encounter

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Feb 10, 2007.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you lookn’ at me from your peripheral vision
    I know because our eyes always have that collision
    Looking into each other
    Then you act like u didn’t see me
    I act like I don’t see you
    Why grown folks be trippn
    I feel it you feel it
    So what are we gonna do

    I was thinkn since you and I
    Seem to be syncing in the same boat
    I’ll make the first move and throw out my rope
    And pull you to my safety
    Wanna have some stimulating conversation
    With you
    Read you some verses that I penned
    Just from thoughts of you.

    Its that time of year when love is in the air
    And lovers show they care
    Would like to share a glass of wine
    Followed by somewhere fine to dine
    That’s right that means
    we will be spending time
    getting to know each other
    cuz we been feeling that flutter
    of cupid wings brisking by
    bringing us closer and closer

    And I’ve already talked to much
    So I might as well cut to the chase
    You don’t have a Valentine
    Guess what? I don’t have one either
    And I was just wondering ……

    Cat got my tongue because your
    Starring into my eyes even deeper
    Something is telling me
    You are keeper
    Ok….where was I

    I was just wondering since
    You don’t have a Valentine
    And I don’t have one either
    How bout we be each others
    You keep checkn’ out me
    I keep checkn’ out you
    And quite frankly I’ve done enough checkn’

    I’m ready to move on to the next level
    So here’s my name and my number
    All you have to do
    Is send me a text that reads……
    Hey Valentine, It’s me
    Just sending hugs and kisses to YOU

    :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1:
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And so love grows ...


    From the stares and the glares we passed to each other,
    and the Valentines candy...cherries dipped in chocolate cover.

    Each of us afraid to let our feelings just flow,
    but why should we keep our love on the low?

    If you gently touch my heart, and I touch you soul
    discovering that...we both struch "Pure Gold"

    Since we admire each other, needless to say,
    let's make this happen...on Valentine's day
    :hearts1:


    It's bound to happen with this Wonderful piece sis, thanks for sharing it...^5
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, why do grown folk trip? Guess that can happen at any age. This was a sweet and lovely piece poetess, and I enjoyed queent's flowback as well.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 4everluv
    Oh i just love this flow..
    indeed its gown folks exchanging straight up
    from the thoughts that will touch the heart
    wonderful flow :)

    Peace and Love
     
  5. spicybrown

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    Awesome, 4EVERLUV. Looks like your better half is in for a tasty toasty Valentines D:heart:y treat:spinstar:

    :hearts1:

    :picture:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now i'll be watching u ........u on a V-Day splash
     
  7. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello queen:
    I must admit the piece is fiction
    but I have been in a very similar
    situation. Thank you for the visit
    and continued love and you always
    have a tyte flo back


    watz:
    We do be trippn sometimes. But I guess
    your right it can happen at any age.
    Thank you for the read and kind words


    Bluewater:
    Aww thanks, I'm a straight up
    kinda sista though. Your love
    is much appreciated.


    spicy, spicy:
    Hey girl, I'm just getting into
    the Valentine spirit. Thank you
    for the love and visit.


    $$RICH$$:
    You gonna be watchn' me
    watchn' you.


    Much Luv to you all
     
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