Black Poetry : A UnKNOWN PATH

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A path taken by many of us that's broken unknown and stained.

    Obsession or no love
    the power of eternity
    beyond understanding

    boys yet not man
    girls pose as woman
    displaying mixture still african

    Yet from self ego evil demanding
    requiring much time or attention
    inside an endless light unknown

    Da winds of life continue to confuse
    while one's tongue lash and abuse
    the path still unclear but mis-used

    Not sure who to follow
    not sure who to fear
    no love wit pride say we don't care

    A vision of the future darken
    the memory of da past fades
    when we become blind to da tongue blade

    The teaching of a wise man
    an innocence taken in vain
    without togetherness words go unheard & stain

    Now i see a flash of all that was
    and a breath of many last
    the shadow in da moonlight
    hidden from da pain

    All things we bring in life
    can it be explained of us why
    are still mad of our past or the future
    many discoveries but no answer to recoveries

    Upset mix emotions human intellect intercedes
    can we replace,renew or overcome to succeed
    or will we continue our self inflicted message of hate
    is this a core to our greater debate

    Build self strength of character
    change self path of emotional ego
    relive the channel of da womb
    not physically but spiritually

    There inside da unknow path is love
    a hope with dreams unfilled
    this place to become a brother a sister
    one of truth and guiding understanding

    life measures of us we know
    point/hate/fight/tongue kill/lie & not bond
    where we headed is a path of self destruction
    DA-PATH

    A Dyamondluv poem
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    Well expressed....Got me thinkin about Da-Path!
     
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    We all have to change our path
    no matter if we going ahead or backwards
    stop to understand the voices
    bring solutions beyond da critic of life
    what is messured is not our fate to judge
    but our goal to resolve it's da path
    we walk and think in that has us on hold

    thank you sister love for the visit into my mental
     
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    Yes Da-Path
    is very tricky for us to follow
    Even if we thnk our answers are the way
    Someone can come along and take ya on a ride and while your steadily wishing to see the
    Quiet home front again soon enough!
     
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    true dat ........
     
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    PREACH

    POWERFUL!
     
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    1poet thankz yes u know what i mean .....
     
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    Nice!
     
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    Beautiful!
     
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    The beautiful gift yet to come in da path
    of our beings which we so liveth in
    for our time is now setting marks for thy future
    is where the true glory will cometh
    our path will judge future fate......we must walk right

    Thank you my beloved sister for droppin inside my mental
     
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