Black Poetry : A True Hustler

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by illwillthakid, Mar 18, 2004.

  1. illwillthakid

    illwillthakid Member MEMBER

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    I'm a hustler
    & if you don't recognize this by my words
    Then apparently your spoken heard
    is simply obsurd
    I'm constantly on the grind
    To feed these feens their ryhmes
    Line after line
    Time after time
    with no miscalculations
    Cause while Im in the lad bastin'
    These critics is out here waitin'
    While these haters are out here hatin'
    Some choose to laugh
    But in the aftermath
    Im that father, or that son, or that brother
    You wish you had
    Cause I'm a hustler
    & what I have to offer is truely prolific
    Cause I am gifted poetically
    Though Im not from poetically gifted
    & I will handle and ship it
    No need to pick up the phone
    Or step foot out your home
    Because it comes to you on it's own
    Stronger than verbal herbals
    & deeper than food for thought
    to simple to learn and too complicated to be taught
    Didn't make it for elevation
    Cause Im trying to get you high
    I'm a hustler and what I have to offer
    Will only make you cry
    & make you think
    & at times it'll even make you laugh
    In the end you'll realize that its something you've always had
    As the answer comes to mind
    POETRY
    At last
     
  2. Niyha

    Niyha Member MEMBER

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    nice alternative to all the hustler/wanksta talk goin' around...
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    posed well
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. GYMEFORTE

    GYMEFORTE Active Member MEMBER

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    form 1 hustler 2 another let me get afew bags of that vibe !!!
    nice....
     
  5. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like...
    I really,really like.
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, I'm vibin your tight flow here. Flow on.
     
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