Black Poetry : A Troubled Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Aaliyahmonet, Jul 19, 2002.

  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Apr 4, 2002
    Messages:
    857
    Likes Received:
    15
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +15
    I see you standing at the corner every day,
    I know something is wrong,
    Won't you tell me what's on your mind,
    That way I can help get your mind right.

    Are you confused?
    Are you being abused?
    Are you being misused?

    Tell me, what is wrong wit dis picture?

    Maybe you can fill me in with all the details.

    I wanna help you, i wanna be there for you, whenever the time of need, we can help each other, you feelin me?

    Somebody isn't pleasin you like the way you want to be pleased,
    Someone is not givin you the right time of day for play,
    Sista help me out, tell me what is the matter here.

    Your man ain't satisfyin you like the way you wanna be satisfied,
    It hurts you so deep down inside, that you can't hide your feelings no more.

    Can you find a decent man that will treat you like his queen of heaven?

    Is your man letting you down and out?

    Calling you such names like *****, a ho, or a ****?

    You deserve better than him, someone that is going to treat you right,

    A man that won't treat you like his slaveworker or somebody.

    Never let a man tell you you ain't beautiful, because beauty comes from within you.

    I love you, i don't wanna see your feelings get hurt.

    *I dedicate this to all the women on this web site who are in troubled relationships*
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 23, 2001
    Messages:
    1,495
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Education/Administrative
    Location:
    Metro Detroit
    Ratings:
    +0
    Hey Ma...

    I'm sure the sistas hea will appreciate this gesture! That was madd kool of you...

    Reas
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    just simply awesom!!
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 10, 2001
    Messages:
    2,696
    Likes Received:
    5
    Occupation:
    Self Employed, Business Consultant
    Location:
    Kansas City, Missouri
    Ratings:
    +6
    Been Rescued...But I feel you!

    For the sista's who are still feeling shame...
    That read but don't wanna leave their name...
    Good of you to let them know that they are
    not to blame!
    Beautiful Scribe from an equally Beautiful Heart!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
Loading...