Black Poetry : A tribute to you *mother*

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  1. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mwanamke ni chachu ya maendeleo /A woman is an important part of development
    Sometimes i wonder what you were like in another life,
    if you in your past life were a Goddess
    on a island, full of fresh tropical fruits
    with colorful skirts that blossomed at your hips, made of flowers
    and rays of sun
    you would arise with the dawn and
    depart with the moon,
    in mystery, and full of grace
    . soaked in gold's and silver's
    on your buttery island skin,
    sometimes i wonder when you put your head to rest,
    and your thoughts set free to wonder
    did u dream of fishes, or maybe wishes of childbirth and when you gave birth
    tha fruit of you womb was me? or maybe
    .........maybe you remained childless in that lifetime
    waiting for the right spot in the timeline making everything perfect for you and me
    in wisdom of course, and love
    i wonder in your following lives
    all your life did u feel like a piece was missing
    a piece of your soul, to wide to cover, to deep to fill.
    i wonder if life was shaped on the curves of your hips
    and the sun kissed by the fullness of your lips, giving it extra shine,
    i think, if God created you in his image, does that mean that you also are love?
    if God created you in love, with the power to love, in his image and likeliness
    does that make you the Goddess of love?
    is your purpose on this earth to love us all,
    or can i be stingy, soak up all your loves energy
    drown in your remedy, tha inspiration for life
    the pen for life's poetry
    i want to give thanks for allowing me to grow with you
    grow in you, giving me a chance to taste love, my first experience
    fill the ink of my pen with it so i can continue to write your praise
    your tribute, the only thing i can give you, that would fit you
    a part of my soul on, wouldn't do, because my soul at birth
    was my gift from you.
    and you know me inside and out
    Sometimes i wonder whut you where like in another life
    were you the Goddess on the tropical island...
    with the long flowing hair, skin as smooth as cocoa butter
    footsteps along an empty beach, accompanied only by God
    Penzi la mama tamu, haliishi hamu /Mother's love is so sweet that you never have enough of it



    Awwww i wrote dis for my mommy lol Today January tenth, we share a birthday, so i guess happy birthday to us lol :cake::hearts4:
     
  2. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this piece and where you went with it.

    To wonder how and where our mother is a beautiful thing

    The love was evident

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    to share a birthday with your mom is truly special. i like the fitting tribute to your mom. happy birthday passionfruit and to your mother. may you two beautiful sista cherish this one of kind love that you both have received!!!!!!!!!1:wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :hi: :hi: :hi: :hi:
     
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    Thanks for tha luv, my time here has been real nice, and i've been shown much love
    and i am happy to be able to spend even a moment of my nineteenth birthday here
    holla back passion
     
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    beautiful is all i can say
    this piece express the love and warmth in sharing moments
     
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    This touched my heart
    That was very nice
    Your mother is someone
    That is irreplacable
    Much Love Poet
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for blessing the spot. I absolutely adored this piece. Flow on... and Happy belated Birthday (((((hugs & kisses)))))
     
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