Quiet Poetry Lounge : A tribute to ROMEO (ghetto cali-style)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GeneticSoul, Dec 16, 2003.

  1. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo romeo
    where u be stayin at?
    My homegirl say u was feelin me
    well is that chu
    or u playin minegames
    i mean cuz if it waz u then
    im diggin u and ya flow
    u know
    u got that fade just right
    and ya really get me heated wit ya words so sweet and coo
    u know t those words ya be fillin my head wit
    that nonsense of me bein ya baby moma
    it be like
    yo i hate hate to jam out on ya like dis
    but u know
    how my daddy be trippin
    when we be close and ish
    ahe yo
    romeo
    u know wanna know somfin
    i really wanta be ya girl fasho
    but right now we got to keep this heat cooled down
    cuz we is in 2 different worlds
    its like ya pops a crip and mine a blood
    **** they say black power but weres the love
    i really want to be wit u romeo
    i wat to love u
    u know
    but fa now i just be ya boo
    well looks like i gotsta jet
    so
    I'll holla

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    Many flavors feel my tounge but the best one is the poets song

    Gen~ETHIC Soul
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my goodness sweet romance
    loving the amazing flow
    of Romeo and Juliet
    caught in the mix
    real world drama
    very nice indeed
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooweeeee!
    i felt da mixin
    and da twist
    of a blazin Romeo
    forth where be thou
    whom cometh da Queen
    making a blissin theme
    tyte tyte tyte !!!!
     
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    this was tight drop
    $$ indeed summed it up my thoughts
    as well...nice write flow on :angel1:
     
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    GeneticSoul
    You have the style and talent of a great poet. Known world wide.. Black and well read. To day they call how we speak ebonics. For Paul Lawrence Dunbar.. it made life come alive.

    I like his work. I grew up listening to him at a early age.

    " My homegirl say u was feelin me
    well is that chu " .. this line took me there.


    You told Romeo.. there now exist two different worlds..you will give him a call. Maybe!
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i am torn genetic soul...you post a poem filled with so much soul
    the sense of tribes...our separations..
    yet feelings fly trying to break the lines ..it is about communication
    within this poem you bring all that..
    I hope you two can find a way to tap
    into th e mix of life outside the ghetto (cali-style)
     
  7. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankyou all

    im feelin ya connectin to my flow like such and im so thankin all yas
    ttyl
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can someone say masterpiece? This was just creatively wonderful.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, agreein with all of the above: this was straight up dope, girl
     
  10. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ty yalls

    u guys just dont know how good this family thing feels to a girl like me right about now.... its like u take self esteem and raise it for me thank u so much!!!

    Gen~Ethic soul
     
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