Black Poetry : A tribute to mama(a beauty unknown)

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  1. DeepSistaSoul

    DeepSistaSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are like a flower full of beauty and grace. you are like a dove pure and gentle. You are the sweet melody of sincerity. Like nature's own sweet winds and sunlight you keep me alive. Your smile is natural, your love unfailing.
    it is no mystery that you are of a beauty unknown.
    You stood by me through the storms, and battles.
    You fed me when I was hungry.
    even though you have struggled.
    I cherish your upbringing.
    Like a glass vase you are fragile and breakable.
    A mere rose among the weeds.
    You are mama, no other can replace, you no other
    can compare to you
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remembering my mother...thank you. Like yours, she was my inspiration.

    Thank you :heart: This is beautiful.
     
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    This poem is very sad. Keep the Faith Sista.:)
     
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    I am deeply saddened to here about the passing of your mother.
    I am praising god for mine while she is still here, kind of like giving her flowers to her while she is alive.

    The deepest of them all
    deepsistasoul
     
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    DeepSistaSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Shay, It made me cry writing it, I guess it was really from my heart then, if I could feel the pain. even though mama is not gone, thanking god for her is enough to bring tears to my eyes.
     
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    dis was beautiful da motherly love she gives unto u
    MOTHERS can't be replaced never !!! I loved this
     
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    DeepSistaSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks father figure Rich, and once more the truth rolls off your tounge like butta
     
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