Black Poetry : A Tree

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Jul 3, 2003.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The seed is now a tree,
    shade from the sun,
    an Umbrella from the rain,
    a place to lean on,
    and yesterday
    it was only a seed

    Peace :heart:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice piece Bluewater, a new type of flow for you...feeling this. Says so much with so little! Nice read!
     
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    when before it was just a seed
    now it fufills my need
    for knowledge, wisdom and understanding
    its branches and leaves whisper to me
    be all you can be
    but always remember the
    force that caused me to grow
    and the force that brought you to know
    about me
    when before it was just a little seed
    now its a full grown tree
    swaying to the
    winds of time
    in my mind....

    blue...your poetry is very thought provoking
    please keep scribing gurl
    cause i definately feel it...
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey angelicsage
    my sister thank you so much for feeling my scribe
    moving in all direction..
    still growing
    Much Love to ya :heart:

    Hey Khasm13 i am smiling you..
    you felted where I was coming from...
    so deep is your reply,
    again you have open my eyes..
    and i smile, because
    we who once was seed,
    is now becoming a great tree.
    Much Love to Ya :heart:

    Peace
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue, this is indeed a different approach from you but I must say, I like it. short sweet and thought provoking :)
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis was sweet and the flava of it was awesome
    ya pen is kissing da page in good love
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HeySwtT..thank you..yeah it is a different approah..
    i am glad you felted this short flow..thank you

    hey RICH thanks for feeling this
    alot of meaning and feeling in this
    short flow....
    thank you

    Thank you all so much for feeling me on this family :grouphug:
    Peace
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...alot is said in this small poem...i like it ALOT...
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Blue, :wave:

    This is a wonderful piece!! So much said in a compact way. Very nice!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  10. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a little says alot...nice!
     
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